POLYGAMY PTE ESSAY SOLVED
Polygamy has increased widely in recent years. What solutions can you Brought forward to decrease this issue.
Family is confined to happiness, sorrow and emotions. All of
these come into existence when there is a complete family. These days it is
often seen that family members are unhappy because one of the individuals goes
missing. Owing to this case, people left with no other chance other than
getting married once again. This trend has increased a bit in recent past due
to various reasons.
To start with the causes of polygamy, it is important to
consider the root factor that is mental satisfaction. Many times, there is a
case that reports violence among a couple just because of unsatisfied mind.
Satisfaction means a lot to people these days. Everybody wants to achieve
everything he can. When something lacks, people get disappointed and feel
annoyed. In addition to the view of dissatisfaction, kids can be regarded as
the second reason of second marriage. Medical condition of a person is never
meant to be stable. Sometimes, women become unable to bore children and
sometimes men get less productive. In either case, the fertility gets affected.
Having no child brings a person into depression. Beauty is the third view that
changes the mind of people. It can attract people towards it. People often
forget their soul mate and try to find their partner in a new person.
This problem may have many causes but there are also some
solutions which are effective enough to curb the issue. People are depressed
mentally which makes them feel bad and increase the lust for others. Mental
peace can be brought by covering all our worries with relaxing music. The
environment around us greatly changes our mind and the way it thinks.
To conclude, polygamy is a concern, which results in breakup
of many couples but it also has some solutions to fix the issue appropriately.
Thanks for posting thus essay
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Deletethanks for posting this essay
ReplyDeleteVery bad essay. I will post a new one.
ReplyDeletecouldn't agree more.
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DeleteIt is an irrefutable fact that having more than one wife called as polygampy. It has increased intensively in the world. Polygampy is a burning issue. Unfortunately,
ReplyDeleteIt is on rise not in developing countries but also in developed countries. There are multifarious reasons for causing a problem.Government is trying to find the solution to control the situation and fight against it. According to me, I am of the opinion that will discuss all these in my forth coming paragraphs before a conclusion can drawn.
First and foremost point is that in polygampy marriage wives suffer many problem like emotional and mental health.So they have jealous factor to have not proper attention by their husbands.Moreover, Husbands can not manage and give proper attention to all wives at same time so wives get emotional due to neglect them.
The second significant point which is worth mentioning that polygamy has impact not only on wife as well as on children. Children don't get proper take care and they get neglected some places. Beside this, when children demand pocket money from their fathers,they are asked by whose mother you belong to. In addition to this, mothers have to do something to make financial health. They have to do teaching, sweging and others job for their children.
A good example here is, a survey carried by an eminent socialogist Rutherford at the University of Kula lampur who reveals that muslim countires have much issue of polygamy. Thousands of women are suffering of this issue which is on alarming issue.
A key to solving this problem is by awareness and educating which can curb the problem. Women can go for the divorce if they are not getting attention or fianace support. There is other solution they can do mutal friendly aggrement to keep the relationship. Spiritual teaching,seminars, consuelling can do wonders. Youngsters should come forward and lead the movement.Media also have an important role to play. Last but not least national and international bodies should work hand in hand to solve this problem.
To conclude, I am of the opinion that this problem can not only solved by the individual also national bodies get together to form a platform to kill this evil so the world will be good place to live.
Thanks for posting this essay Mr. Prince kumar but I think you have done so many spelling mistakes and typing errors. And last it's "polygamy" not polygampy
Deletei need your opinion, the question in the essay "hat solutions can you Brought forward to decrease this issue" but he has mentioned the problem causes by Polygamy. which he only mentioned in 2nd last paragraph.
Deleteplease i need your expert comment on my point.
This essay is wriiten by one of my team member as he got same essay in the exam and he got 82 in Writing module.We have concluded that PTE scoring in Writing are mostly based on good vocabulary, correct spelling and grammar rather than content.
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ReplyDeletet is an irrefutable fact that having more than one wife is known as polygamy.Polygamy is a burning issue and has increased intensively in the world.Unfortunately, it is on the rise not in developing countries but also in developed countries. There are multifarious reasons for this problem. Government is trying to find solutions to control the situation and fight against it. According to me, I am of the opinion that this problem can be resolved and I will discuss them in the forth coming paragraphs before drawing a logical conclusion.
ReplyDeleteFirst and foremost point is that in polygamy married wives suffer many problems like emotional and mental health.So they have jealousy factor for not having proper attention of their husbands.Moreover, Husbands cannot manage and give proper attention to all wives at same time so wives get emotional due to being neglected.
The second significant point which is worth mentioning is that polygamy has impact not only on the wife as well as on children. Children don't receive the due attention that they are in need of and they get neglected. Besides this, when children demand pocket money from their fathers,they are questioned which mother do they belong. In addition to this, mothers have to do something to financially sustain themselves. They have to resort to teaching, sewing and others jobs for their children.
A good example here is, a survey carried by an eminent sociologist Rutherford at the University of Kuala Lampur who reveals that muslim countries are also hampered by the problem of polygamy. Thousands of women are suffering from this alarming and crippling issue.
A key to solving this problem is by awareness and education, which can curb this cumbersome problem. Women can go for the divorce if they are not getting attention or financial support. Another solution is that they can do mutual friendly agreement to keep the relationship. Spiritual teaching,seminars and counselling can also do wonders. Youngsters should also come forward and lead the movement. Media also have an important role to play. Last but not least national and international bodies should work hand in hand to solve this problem.
To conclude, I am of the opinion that the problem of polygamy can be solved but for that everyone needs to play their role. On individual level as well as national bodies should get together to form a platform to kill this evil so the world can be a good place to live in
I feel this is probably better grammatically but its very lengthy but in essence is a very good essay so thanks for publishing. Apologies to the original author but i felt if someone reads it, they should learn grammatically correct essay.
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Polygamy as a social evil has evidenced an increase in recent years. The causes of polygamy seem to be plenty but the root underlying reason for why a person resorts to polygamy is dissatisfaction from the current marriage. People often resort to polygamy due to various reasons including when either of the partners is infertile, lusts men/women outside of a marriage, financial issues in the marriage and a lot more. In this article, I will propose two ways in which polygamy can be reduced in our society.
ReplyDeleteIt is often believed that a strict law can modify how people behave. Considering polygamy as an unjust and immoral practice, I suggest tightening laws regarding multiple marriages in a society. An act of polygamy should be heavily fined by the law. If it is only one partner who is the culprit of polygamy then he/she should be enforced to pay compensation to the innocent partner. Penalizing polygamy will certainly prevent occurrence of its cases.
Another way to reduce the number of polygamy cases is to research and evaluate the root cause of dissatisfaction among the partners in a marriage. Before acting in a rash and immoral way by cheating a partner or having multiple partners, it is better to take the issue to a marriage counselor. A counselor will not only try to establish understanding between the partners but also resolve issues relating to any dispute among them. This is about curing the polygamy from the root.
Therefore, I suggest both, the law to criminalize polygamy and the ways in which polygamy can be prevented by establishing a common understanding among the monogamous partners with marriage issues.
This is the best one so far with valid solutions. Thanks
DeleteFrom the beginning of time, marriage is considered as a beautiful tie between two hearts. But for some people the previous statement is not true and due to those, polygamy increases widely in recent years. I see this as an issue and there are many reasons which responsible for this. In this essay, I shall discuss what reasons and how polygamy need to be tackled.
ReplyDeletePolygamy means marriage to one or more husband or wife. The people get married second time because they are unhappy with there first marriage. Firstly, people are not of adjusting nature, when they failed to adjust with one partner then they married to another one. The other reason is they only seek the physical relation, which they easily get when they tie to marriage.
Problems like polygamy needs to solved as it has bad effect on the children. When people find something is not going right between then and there partner, then need to talk. Communication is a very good way to solve the problems. For those people who only get married to get laid need to understand that love is more important than other things. So they need to respect and loyal to their partner and don’t look for someone else when they have some physical desires.
To conclude, I would like to say that polygamy increased due to one’s non adjusting nature and issue like this can be decreased by communication and loyalty with their partner.
thank you
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